miércoles, 7 de septiembre de 2016

keys to avoid and fix mixed constructions

  •  The key to avoid mixed construction sentences is making sure that all of the parts of your sentence work together to comlete an idea.

  • The key to fix a mixed construction sentence is often simplifying your writing.
For example:

MIXED:
  • For most people who have pets live longer and happier lives.
REVISED:
  • Most people who have pets live longer and happier lives.
  • For most people who have pets, life is longer and happier.

REMEMBER, make sure that all the phrases and clauses work together logically.

MIXED:
  • Although it is getting late, but I will wait for another hour.
REVISED:
  • Although it is getting late, I will wait for another hour.
  • It is getting late, but I will wait for another hour.

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